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MY LITTLE SUMMER SPLASH by lordcoyote MY LITTLE SUMMER SPLASH by lordcoyote
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Critique by PostPostmodernist Oct 2, 2015, 7:57:12 AM
A very sexy body, pose and outfit. she appears to be in clear euphoric fun which matches well against everything else in the picture. I'm not sure if the 3D back ground adds anything but it doesn't take away.

The splash is vivid and the droplets of water on her skin along with the gleam make it very vivid. The shading of her ribs is a bit too dark which takes some effect away.

I love the flow and texture of her hair as well as how her bikini top is stretch on her. The way her bottoms stretch is also cool.
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Hello there lordcoyote. This is a great art piece that you've created. The body proportions, the pose, the colour composition and the background, everything is just amazing.

Now let's see how you could have made this piece much better:-

1. Contrast:- The hair you've created are beautiful and the flow feel natural too. But one thing that I felt wasn't there was a good contrast. Sure you have used some darker shades and some lighter shades. But it still isn't at it's best. You can experiment a little more and make it much better.

2. Water:- The girl is in the water. And the water is splashing up because of her movements. It's a good concept to bring out the sexiness. But something got left out. The splashing water is not connected well enough with the still water. And that makes it very distracting.
Next. the small droplets of water are moving up all over her body in a very uniform way. It is also defying the laws of physics in not a cool way. You could have added a few droplets up till her thighs and left it to that. But you went up till her head and the results are not very impressive.

3. This is just a suggestion but I have seen some artists try different colour of highlights on the skin. Like blue highlight under moonlight and so on. And the results (if it is done in a good way) are amazing. You could give it a try to make your drawings much better.

That's all I have to say. You are a great artist Sir and this is a great artwork. I hope to see more of your beautiful and sexy girls in the future ;-)

I hope my critique was helpful to you in some way or the other.
Keep drawing and have a nice day :-)
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christeam3 Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2016  Student General Artist
😻😻😻😻
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rui-tei90 Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2016
Damn, Pinkie is so sexy in this picture. Despite her child like nature even she has a mature and sexy side. Love it!😍
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TheDetector Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You certainly made her look adorable :)
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Jose-Ramiro Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
She brought her beach balls.
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Loyreon12 Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2015
nice!
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greatdragonad Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2015
See? Even Pinkie Pie can be sexy and she doesn't even know it
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lordcoyote Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2015
I believe they call that trope "innocent fanservice girl". :thumbsup::XD:
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EchoWing Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
And perfectly timing posting, too, what with the new episode airing today.
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