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MY HALF OF A TRADE WITH . CONTINUED FROM [link]
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It seems to be out of character for Kally to care about another woman seeing her topless, but you know her better than I do. Either Kally really is that shy, even around women, or there’s something about this situation we don’t know.
There’s a lot of story potential here. Are draconians not allowed in that locker room? Is it supposed to be a men’s locker room and neither of them is meant to be there? Has Kally been secretly working at a club that she shouldn’t have? Yeah, I know that’s unlikely, since wings are kind of... distinctive. Maybe Kally really is that shy, even around women? Or she eventually got that way from girls who try to get her naked or into bikinis [link] .
Personally, I think she was in a battle that left her functionally naked, so she’s been reduced to “borrowing” clothes. Not what she usually does, but it’s from somebody she knows, and it’d only be for a few hours. She grabs the first outfit she can find that she can actually wear (she wouldn’t be able to wear most blouses because of her wings), and someone walks in. Now she’s going to have to explain herself pretty quickly to prevent things from getting even worse.
Moving on to art, Kally looks more rendered than, uh, that other girl, which makes sense; she’s closer, so of course we can see her better. I would like to say that the outfit shows off her tush nicely. We can just barely not see her bubblies. I’m glad she has a different modeling contract with some of the other artists here at DeviantArt <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/w/w…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Wink)" />.
Background is clear and easy to understand. One of the benches is a lot closer to the lockers than the other, but that isn’t unrealistic.
CrazyCow benefits from this in that it got me to browse his(?) gallery [link] to try to figure out who that girl is.