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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

Kally brushing her teeth while looking at the camera. Another great scene with mysterious details in the background. I’ll go into this more later.

It’s interesting how some levels of detail don’t matter until they’re given center stage. If Kally had been brawling with someone or trying to get ready to go somewhere and was brushing her teeth at the same time, I would see this differently. Since burshing her teeth is the only action she’s engaging in the effect is lacking, in my eyes. The first time I saw the picture, it didn’t look right to me. It looked like she was sticking a foamy stick up against her closed mouth.

To get this out of the way, her panties are nice and form-fitting, but they look like they were drawn on after the fact by someone who wanted to make sure it could be printed in a tabloid. Again, an effect that works fine when diluted with other distractions and clothing, such as [link] , but the effect on its own would be more appealing to me if it were more realistic. Morgana’s pic here: [link] has the same issue.

Setting is opulent with beautiful marble. I see two sinks here, which suggest she’s grooming in a restroom intended for use by multiple people. A honeymoon suite, perhaps? I see two tubes of toothpaste, obliviously intended to be used by guests. It impresses me how you manage to produce new and detailed backgrounds for every one of your pictures.

Lovely figure, proportions, musculature.

Humorous effect, having her boobs seen in the reflection, and not her face. It must be awkward fitting into an elevator with those honkers sticking out in front and her wings in back.

As a closing note, kudos for having her serve a good example by doing something too many people neglect to.