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AIVA-016

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ANOTHER COMMISH FOR :icondarthgouki:
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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Impact

“You said I should undress for this. Did you mean taking these off, also?”

Aiva seems to have a lot more control than Kally. Kally seems like a one-emotion-at-a-time kind of girl, while Aiva is guarded, quizzical, graceful, direct, and feminine all at the same time without compromising any of those messages. I’m sure Aiva can and would enjoy herself at an outdoor sauna, but I doubt she’d lose herself the way Kally does in this pic: [link]

Background looks a lot more layered than many of your other works. My first impression is a garden labyrinth, supported by the vertical line on the right side. The background has this unnatural line of fog that suddenly appears just behind her. The fog covering her up looks less natural, also. Kally (in the link above) has fog all over of differing intensities, and what hides her breasts is almost as thick as the fog elsewhere. Aiva has a large bunch “down there,” and none in the top half of the picture, making it look photoshopped in. It’s a little surprising that Kally’s pic was posted first, considering how much more sophisticated it looks.

Love the swimsuit; I think a naked woman holding a swimsuit is especially sexy. She could be covered, but she’s choosing to be naked.

I’m not sure the wing would be in front of her hair, but maybe it juts back a bit...? Figure and proportions are otherwise sexily perfect.

If I were in front of her, I’m reasonably sure I’d be screwed. She doesn’t look angry, but I would need to do some fast thinking and a view like that would turn my brain to mush.